*wakes up*



where am i?

who are you?

where are you*gasps*

carrying me?

where did you come from?

What? No one…

no one comes this way.


You broke the facade,

when you went through….

where you found walls…

they saw a way….

Behind you, was left

inspiration, through

every gateway.

But i am not done.


you have done enough.

Now, you rest.

Let them carry your dreams

for the rest of the way.

And for the crowd,

coming through…….

Let them, lead the way.


day 28 poem #28 for 31 day poetry challenge of Maja(Business in rhyme). For more info, follow that link.

this poem continues from day 27, poem 27 cracking

Follow the progress of each day, here: 31 day Poem


10 thoughts on “takeover

  1. Glad to get back to reading your poems …this is a great one as a subtle yet strong message …pleeease let me know if I am not getting this right 🙂 …to me it says to rest it out when inspiration starts to turn into willpower …more effortful …just rest and receive when you have broken down those seeming walls and facade …and let the dreams themselves carry you …now only if I haven’t really messed it up …this message really works for me!

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    1. i am even more glad that you are back…… 😀
      you are always right……..this is indeed trying to say that…….but overall in continuation……..with the next post it will be more clear…..
      3 more days to go….. 😀 😀
      Thank you so much……..really really means a lot!!! 🙂 🙂

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      1. i know……we never get the whole meaning…..and i think we aren’t even supposed to……..we add meaning for ourselves just like life……and that is what is so fascinating and magical about poetry….. 🙂 🙂

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