won to lose!

by pushkar prabhat

Every direction,

every step, somehow…..

leads me back

to this burnt field.

i am stuck here

since days, fatigued.

There is no resistance,

there is no fog,

there are no monsters, yet

this open vastness is


There is movement,

but no real journey.

And in comparison to

being surrounded by

blinding fog, and caught

in a net of grass;

this is mutiny.

*falls on knees*

i feel so much rage.

i feel so much power

inside, that i could

crush any enemy.

And all this energy

is only killing me.


day 16, poem #16 for 31 day poetry challenge of Maja(Business in rhyme). For more info, follow that link.

this poem continues from day 15, poem 15 Trees!

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